Your work is showing improvement sir, keep up the hard work and you'll be turning around magic before too long!
Your work is showing improvement sir, keep up the hard work and you'll be turning around magic before too long!
I think there's something here. Based on this short, I think you have a good understanding of comedic timing, but you need to study up on presentation and production value. Also, the lack of proper resolution to the story itself is a hindrance.
If you stick with it and keep moving forward with a goal to improve, I think you can really make a name for yourself!
A creative team based in Atlanta, GA focusing on film, TV, and puppetry.
Atlanta, GA
Joined on 7/29/14